"A billionaire's daughter invites the ten people who destroyed her father to a luxury retreat where their own crimes become the weapon against them."
The biggest thing to watch is Bridget's morality. Right now she crosses from antihero into villain territory because she personally engineers deaths. If you want readers to root for her, you may want to adjust the ending so she exposes them rather than directly killing them — or make the story intentionally about how revenge transforms her into the very thing she hates.
Jose A. Martinez is an independent author who writes across genres, including suspense, mystery, faith-based fiction, and family drama. His stories blend compelling characters with thought-provoking themes, drawing inspiration from history, folklore, faith, and everyday life. When not writing, he enjoys researching unusual historical events and developing new story ideas to share with readers around the world.