Developmental States: Relevancy, Redundancy Or Reconfiguration?

Ms Low's opinions and analysis of theories and practices of the developmental state are evidently sound and interesting, providing good insight to a long time student of the subject (such as myself). Those she brings together in the book and the chapters they contribute are similarly interesting and intellectualy sound. My problem with the book is a very basic one, and extremely fixable, which is what makes it all the more frustrating. Ms Low's introduction and overview is full of the most basic grammar, punctuation and tense faults. Sentence structure frequently verges on nonsensical, with some sections requiring six or seven re-reads before the actual meaning can be extracted. I double checked with my thesis tutor just in case i was misunderstanding the topic but i wasn't, the paragraphs simply did not consist of logical sentences. This is evidently not a printing error, and perhaps Ms Low's editor should have reviewed the book more thoroughly before going to print, or perhaps Ms Low herself should have reviewed her own work more thoroughly. I have found similar errors and problems throughout the book though not as severe as in Ms Low's section. There is a reasonably wide range of literature in regards the developental state and i would suggest choosing one of those instead of this text. Having purchased it some months ago i am unable to return it and therefore decided to put in the effort of breaking down the sentences and paragraphs to understand what the author was actually trying to say. Had someone left a review informing me of these issues i would definately have taken their advice. Save yourself the trouble and leave well alone.