
RedBlitzenwood
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Not the worst book I've read. It feels like someones first attempt at writing a book with few if any professional editors. But I'll probably read it again. Might even get the sequels. I recommend Daniel Arenson (who's also on google play) for anyone who likes this kind of thing.
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Michael James
The writing seemed a little simplistic, like a first time author. The story was good enough, but trailed off before the ending. It wasn't quite a cliffhanger, but not tidy enough for satisfaction. I'm not sure if I will continue with the series since the writing was not to my taste. 7/10 stars.

William Grass
I have read entire series without spoiling too much it's not your Harry Potter series but almost just enjoyable and easy too read but their are 2 bad things about that doesn't give a perfect score. one is each chapter and book are too short and because if that each book doesn't have a finality except for the first one. each just seem to flow to the next one..example one book could end in the middle of the yr with bad guy arrested the the next book picks up that in the same school yr as they return from winter break. the second problem is the book is about the MC being first male wizard in a world where only girls have magic and all the adventure and problems he has but that's just 40% of what each is. each chapter or every other is about other characters and what they are doing while MC is doing his thing that's 60% of each book. it series would be better if each book or 80% of it was about MC and less about other charters point of view